A Quick Peak at Twisted Eden's First Chapter
Silence dominated the region, and everything within it was engulfed in an expanse of emptiness. Here, nothing existed and nothing was present. Nothing… except for an endless panorama of white that stretched out as far as the eye could see. In this place, there was nothing to see, nor was there anything to smell, touch, taste, or hear. No wind blew, no rain fell, no current flowed and nothing existing for me to even lie down on.
I drifted alone within an endless space with no forces preying on my body. I had no idea where I was or how I ended up in a place like this. The only thing I knew was that I wanted an escape, for this place was lonely, bare, and quiet. Nothing ever happened, and time seemed to be motionless. I didn’t know what was going on, and I wanted to leave badly, so I attempted to run away to make my escape. But, as I tried to move, my mind refused to function, leaving my body dead and unresponsive.
I was stuck here in a paralytic state with nothing to see and nothing to do. All that I could hope was that something would happen, for I was trapped inside a realm that seemed to be separate from the normal living world. I desperately waited, and waited, and waited…until things slowly began to change.
While waiting, I felt a chilled breeze pass over my skin rather than the constant numb feeling of nothingness. After that, I picked up small hints of smells and heard muted sounds outside the white world into which I had been cast. As time continued to pass, one by one my senses became aware of my true surroundings, and my body became active.
First, I smelled the scent of wet grass as if it had just finished raining. I heard the sound of many crickets in the distance. The sound of the insects grew louder, and I felt a rock-solid surface harden beneath me. The more my body picked up on things, the more my body became responsive.
As my ability to feel slowly returned, an itch irritated my skin. The itch felt like bugs crawled on my skin, so my body twitched as my reflexes began to respond. As I shuddered because of the pests, my conscience mind awakened. It was then, when my mind began functioning… that I took notice of what was happening and when I finally realized that I had been in a deep sleep.
That silent, white world that I had been thrown into was my subconscious domain. I couldn’t move because I was unconscious, and that world was not physical. So as my mind awakened from its slumber, I opened my eyes to the conscience state that I had left.
I had been unconscious for an unknown amount of time, and I did not know whether an hour or a week had passed. The only thing I knew was that I had no clue where I was…
Now that you have read the sample writing from Chapter one, it's time to give you guys an idea of what's going on.
The Story is about a young Prince from another Realm who had his family and Kingdom taken away from him during an invasion. As the Prince tried to escape his falling Kingdom, he ends up being ambushed with Amnesia being the result of the attack. Now, unaware of his identity, the young Prince seeks answers while the ones who crushed his Kingdom seek his head. In order to survive, he is forced to take the identity of others to safely uncover his past. He becomes Ace…
Twisted Eden will be the first book to combine various kinds of book types into a single story. For the most part, the book will be told in first person, but whenever a major action scene takes place such as a fight sequence or an intense dialogue exchange, the book will turn into a comic strip. I have given this type of a book a name. I call it a True Hybrid book since it is a combination of two very different types of story telling.
Twisted Eden will be an ongoing series with each character developing from teens to young adults as the series progresses. The first book will be released April 6th, while the rest will follow every three months. For more information, please visit my facebook page at
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Thank you and enjoy.
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